Encoded Final Draft

First draft feedback review.








The feedback we received was all very helpful and a lot of it will be taken on board and changes will be made.

Main feedback points:
A lot of the shots were unsteady. This was due to mistake made on filming location. Some shots should have been filmed using a tripod and they weren't. This was a bug mistake and has caused problems while editing.
The bike shoot is very good. this shot was very popular and was mentioned on most of the feedback sheets.
Another major point is that we used an electric guitar in the woods. This is an oversight by the band and is a major continuity error. Some people this may have impacted the woods section in a negative whereas some people said that they didn't notice.
Lots of people did find that they didn't like how there were 2 people singing to only one vioce. We are planning to solve this by recording someone singing the song and playing it over the top of the original song. This will make it sound as if there is 2 people singing the song and will make the video look a lot more professional.


Average marks:
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