Encoded First draft review.

As a group we went through the entire video and heavily scrutinized it for faults. This was a very helpful thing to do as we have learnt a lot from it so we know what to do on our next photo shoot.

This was a very liked shot and needed to be slowed and shown for longer.

As a group we found this shot boring and we are planning to remove it. We felt that this song completely disrupted the entire tempo of the film and did not fit with any of the other shots that we had filmed. The rest of the video has been in close areas, for example we were indoors or there were lots of trees around. We felt that this shot was far to open and took the focus away from the singers and the lyrics.

The singer breathes in before he starts singing we didn't notice this at the time of editing so this will be changed or removed. We feel it makes this section of the video flows less and we didn't like it.

In this shot we all thought that the pan to the right was too fast and unsteady. This was a mistake made while filming because a tripod was not used. We are planning to go back to this location and film the shots again.

We feel that this shot may be too boring and unsteady and for these reasons they are going to be refilmed and maybe removed from the production. Also another reason we did not like this shot it both the singers are carrying bags. This makes the video look very unprofessional and also is a major continuity error. At no other point in the video is anyone carrying a bag apart from in this shot.

This is the shot that we found most needed changing out of all the shots listed. This is not shown in the picture but the shot it very unsteady and also as you can see it is very blurred. For these reasons it will removed from the final video.

With all of the above improvements made and other minor editing changes we hope that our overall mark will increase and we will be pleased with the final production.